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Every Dream Felt So Right
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Every Dream Felt So Right |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Every Dream Felt So Right There was so many reasons For writing with affection My heart felt the attachment Of love linked connection I still remember those times Feeling the togetherness The magic I felt between us Gave reasons to express As passion ignited our souls We wrote of love and light Desires flowed with reasons Every dream felt so right Remember how it used to be You always had the time Still as your heartsongs play I am reminiscing in rhyme Hope ©2007 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
As passion ignited our souls We wrote of love and light Desires flowed with reasons Every dream felt so right and that is why there are wonderful words such as hope... you write like a rush hour passion, engulfing the lips of time...precious and sweet... |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Remember how it used to be You always had the time Still as your heartsongs play I am reminiscing in rhyme~ Such a beautiful ending. Very nicely written Krysti ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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