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Open Poetry #41

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-07-14 09:04 PM

You are stretching my heart too thin
to let the swirling black hand
make into a string
to vibrate out music
before I disappeared at all
to sing with you

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2007-07-14 10:53 PM

beautiful expression....enjoyed these words, and images it presented!

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Life is a balance
of holding on and letting go (KU)

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-07-15 12:27 PM

Most beautiful.

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Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2007-07-15 11:42 AM

A very lovely and ethereal write... liked it very much!

"Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears
To-day of past Regrets and future Fears..." - Omar Khayyam

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2007-07-16 06:25 PM

Very beautiful indeed!!!!

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

5 posted 2007-07-17 11:47 AM

You seem to have a different voice when you write poetry. I like it, as do I like this poem. You have talent D.

- Ed

“Well all the apostles, they’re sittin’ on the swings, sayin’ I’d sell off my savior for a set of new rings.”

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