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Time with You
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Time with You |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Time with You Touch me, please. Touch me. Slide your hands there, slowly up. Like you do. Like you touch me. So good when you do. It makes me want to beg for more Please touch me there. And … Well, that wasn’t where I was thinking But you make it work so well. Dance with me, please. Dance with me. Your fingers tapping over my body as it sways. Like it does. Like you make me dance. A slow dance to silent music. I long to feel you dancing over me. Please, dance again on my skin. Please … Dance with me. Sing to me, please. Sing to me Deep voice melding to my soft tune. Like we do. Like you strum an instrument. Like you play me. Feelings soar to a soprano's crescendo Please, sing to me. Again … Sing your song. Please. As I plead for more. Alison |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful just beautiful !!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
1slick_lady Thank you so much Alison |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A very pleasing write Alison, very much enjoyed my friend, sensual and needing, brought many visions and many thoughts. Rick |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The dance can sometimes be the most wonderful thing can it not lady A?? Very much enjoyed you here.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Luscious like a walk in the forest...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Rick Thank you for reading and enjoying Like you do. I treasure your comments. Alison |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
D The dance sometimes is the height of my day. Thank you for seeing it through my eyes. A |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
James Thank you for taking the walk with me Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, a woman that speaks her wants is a lovely woman indeed, enjoyed this |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Like you make me dance. A slow dance to silent music. I long to feel you dancing over me." heck yeah...  really liked this  |
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Roysie Member
since 2007-08-05
Posts 102Canada |
Reminds of a great old song by The Tubes. "At this moment of surrender darling, if you really care..don't touch me there." |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
soft and sensual...very nice |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Aziza... Such sweet sensual pleas make it difficult if not impossible for a romantic to resist. MoonShadow . |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Dark Stranger You so often make me smile Thank you A |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
SEA Thank you, dahlink. I am loving that you love this and I am loving that you read my poems. You mean a lot to me. A |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Roysie Thank you for reading, enjoying and brining your thoughts here. A |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Kahlil Thank you. I am glad that you liked this one. It's pretty special to me. A |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
MoonShadow Thank you. Your comments touch me inside A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Please. As I plead for more." really sensual Alison bears reading over and I did several times |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Kate, Thank you. It's rather nice to know you are reading when I am - silly, but it's a nice feeling. Alison |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
I can not reread this without my eyes filling with tears and feel an outpouring of the tenderest feelings for you. S poigniant, explicit and beautiful this is. And I will keep it J |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Oh my! What a lovely Post Alison!-- Thank you for the good read ARCTIC WIND |
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