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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2007-08-12 01:10 PM

Somewhere In Rhyme
~*Marge Tindal*~

Somewhere in rhyme I have loved you
in word-thoughts inked sublime
Somewhere in time I have found you
cavorting through my rhyme~

Somewhere in my memory
I have found us just as we were back then
Somewhere in time ... somewhere in rhyme
that's just the way it always has been~

Stay with me now, darling, forever
let us traipse through this life once more
Somewhere in time ... somewhere in rhyme
knowing there is much love in store~

Forever in time ... forever in rhyme
thoughts of us etched in my heart
Somewhere in time ... somewhere in my rhyme
I stretch to reach the deepest part
of the two of us together
just as it was meant to be
me loving you ... you loving me~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

1 posted 2007-08-12 01:14 PM

Love this one Marge

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2007-08-12 02:41 PM

Ah,Marge ever the romantic. Lovely, "late"

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

3 posted 2007-08-12 02:46 PM

I could just see a smiling couple waltzing with movements as one, when I read this.

Rae

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2007-08-12 08:23 PM

Ooooooh! This is pretty! *hugs*....jo

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2007-08-12 08:49 PM

How beautiful, Marge! You are a wonderful poetess.

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2007-08-12 10:41 PM

Dear Marge: Romantic and lovely! Bet I know who you had in mind!!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2007-08-12 10:58 PM

May your love rhyme sublime last 'til the end of time!

So lovely a penning!

EO

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

8 posted 2007-08-13 01:04 AM

Marge, This was so lovely, it touched me where I live, in my heart. Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem

Huggs Kimberly

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2007-08-13 08:33 AM

*SIGH*

this is so wonderful Marge

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

10 posted 2007-08-13 11:40 AM

  Marge...

    I love the time
       you spend in rhyme
           to take us through the miles.

    Leave none behind
       and oh sublime
          you give us all a smile.

             MoonShadow
.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2007-08-14 11:10 PM

As melodic, as the waltz itself.
Lovely write.
TD

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

12 posted 2007-08-15 12:14 PM

I can relate so much to this , I have just written about , sharing time and reminiscing in rhyme

Hope

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2007-08-15 01:14 PM

Thanks everyone ... I love it when my quill drops into that old romantic bottle of ink~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2007-08-15 04:22 PM

Well done Marge...you also reminded me of the
movie "Somewhere In Time"....Did I ever
need a hankie alert with that one.

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

15 posted 2007-08-15 06:35 PM

Marge,
Beautiful words, well written.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2007-08-15 07:14 PM

Magnus~
Thank you ... guess what my all-time favorite movie is ??
Yep ... you got it !!

Gemini~
Thank you ... it's nice to see you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2007-08-22 12:23 PM

Somewhere in my memory
I have found us just as we were back then

Oh, sweet lady... this is absolutely lovely!!

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