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Open Poetry #41

Betrayer

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

0 posted 2007-08-10 05:37 AM

I left my ex husband about 3 months ago. I wrote the following poem about him.

Betrayer

How you did so betray me,

Ashamed,

Of who I am,

Of what I want.

That is what you made me.

You think I am the betrayer,

But I say nay,

I see you for what you are,

I see you for who you are.

You are a deceiver.

How you did so deceive me,

Angry,

At Who I am,

At what I want.

You see that and now you believe me.

Your detriment is to yourself,

Your arrogance was your downfall,

And I rid myself of you,

May you live in piece with yourself.

Rachael

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2007-08-10 06:39 AM

would never pick sides in a dog fight
but enjoyed your snapshots of the heart

brings back memories

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-08-10 07:20 AM

Nice writing...James

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2007-08-12 05:25 PM

Rachael

I have missed you and have to say that I kind of saw this coming. It was looming like a truck going like a bat out of hell your way. I am sorry that you are going through this though. Please, email me. You know the address and the way back to friends who care about you.

xoxoxo
Alison

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