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2 leafs, yellow
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2 leafs, yellow |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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It's mid august but i felt the Fall today as branches sighed in solidarity 2 leafs, yellow, wandered to no specific destination and the retro sky redeemed all that knelt before it and i braced myself fearing i may never get to know you. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Oh, the ending took my breath away. I felt time, in silent motion. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess, Kahlil expressed my sentiments, exactly! Exquisitely expressed emotions with an economy of words. I feel your poetry. It is wonderful to see you sharing your talent with us again!  Giving you a warm and loving, welcome-home hug, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, those last 4 lines... absolutely perfect! *S* Beautiful write! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done ma'am.... I watched a few leaves fall as well... and know time passes... sometimes with dread and sometimes with regrets... sometimes unmarked... I like the possible meanings.. the option the reader has..of drawing layers into it or simply enjoying it for the surface level... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good to read you again Michele, and I agree with Cpat's response, I am not as good at replies, but I loved the feel of this~~  M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
inkedgoddess, Nice!!! Another for the library. I love your writing. miscellanea |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kids...nice to be around here again  |
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gwaihir Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 58Sub-tropical, USA |
Enjoyed |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh how lovely this is Ruth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
perfection goddess |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well done, Mish! Good to read you again. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This is so well worded and yes, has different meanings to different people. I sense we need take the time, to get to know others close to us, before it is too late. Thank you, "late" |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
The season was he, refusing to be forgotten, offering days that were short and memories, promising to return and again feel the kiss of happiness and the warmth of a lover who awaits his return. Each season special as the life we share. Enjoyed your words my friend, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Michele, It's a good poem A woman's poem . . . yet a good poem John PS I would like, with your permission, to add this to my Word file of poems by others. If yes, what name do I give the author? . |
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