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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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One ring on her finger, and so much for being right, she says, pointed inward, and symbolize "I am taken," visualize a little piece of silver and so much for all your meanings when all the words you say don't say a thing. [not sure if this is finished, can't get it out of my head though.] |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Allysa, Over the years, I become more perplexed about meanings. It sounds like you are soul searching now, when you're young. What does "Spoken for" really mean? What are the connotations? Some good, some not-so-good, eh? It's good to read you once again. I admire the depth from which you write. I've always thought your poetic potential is unlimited! Keep writing, Sweet One. Take care, A. hugs, cathy |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Pretty thouht-provoking. I am glad that you didn't wait until it was 'finished' to post this. Sometimes, it seems the ring is supposed to make up for all the words that mean absolutely nothing. Did I just repeat you? A - the possible parrot |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hmmm. I think you are right about the unfinished thought here, but I also think that idea of "unfinished" could be worked quite deftly into a re-write. After all, being "spoken for" is just the beginning of a myriad of resulting emotions, and the years will prove many more words (many of them better left unsaid as well) Ever your fan, I yam.  |
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