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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Remember This flowering rose sweetly smells of spice Awakening senses, I nose it thrice Tilt its nectar, capture its remember That I might indulge, come cold December Such detail: a spider's web, tightly bound, Swiftly, follow silk spirals all around As if seen in multi-petal'd flower Then one might locate one’s central bower... It buds blood red, then blue purples its hue Then, by faith, succumbs to its deepest true Its scent dwells clear, deeper in one’s lone mind A greater gift, one should not look to find. Summer, linger or leave, ‘tis no matter This remembered scent shall not be tattered.  " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
No, I don't think this smell shall ever fade from one's hand or one's mind...well written Lady K. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I proffer thee a divine red rose that shall forever scent your world with love.  Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
hallmark spill of words~beautiful~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
How beautiful! And, I love the smell of roses. |
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Roysie Member
since 2007-08-05
Posts 102Canada |
If I Remember that I hope it's on my death bed...so I won't feel so bad about leaving. One two three one two three one two three...repeat that for 24 hours then try again. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Sissie So lovely! To inhale a fregrance thus, is to remember where one was and also proof that everything continues in some way or form. Perhaps that is the essence of faith.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've heard that scent is the strongest memory... taking us back effortlessly. *S* I like this so very much... especially the closing couplet! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Nice, Sunshine... thanks for the feeling. MoonShadow . |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
few flowers...but the rose have inspired so many words... yours do it justice ma'am... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"It buds blood red, then blue purples its hue" Karilea I have a nose memory of purple roses sent when last it was cold they were sprinkled with fairy dust you have reminded me of winter love so different from the summer kind |
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