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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-08-08 06:35 PM

You're - My Life

As the time goes by, killed by hours of waiting,
The hope in last tears is revived.
When I chose to give in, I was so mistaken -
Couldn't see that one reason to fight.
Then you've opened my eyes to the truth.
Please, forgive me for all times I lied
To myself... All I need now is you.

Just the rain reminds me of latter tears.
I close my eyes and dream again.
A breath of wind... I feel you here,
You're life, still flowing in my veins,
And in each tear - each drop of rain -
I see your face... can't live without you.

You're every tear in my eyes,
Leave everything but you behind,
I'm locking all; I'm turning back
For the last time,
For you're - my life.

Come to my dreams and stop the time,
Let know you're here, my angel, fallen.
You've broken your wings - I'd give you mine,
And give you hope, from you once stolen.
You're more than precious memories,
You're my twin soul - your heart I'll treasure.

And every time I look at the dawn,
Far at the horizon see your eyes.
You're miles away, you're there alone -
Your heart's with me - I'm still alive.
I can't pretend, I won't even try
To escape from this love and to lie to both us...

You're every tear in my eyes,
Leave everything but you behind,
I'm locking all; I'm turning back
For the last time,
For you're - my life.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-08-08 06:49 PM

fine emotive 'write'!

[a pleasure to read]

Applause!!

Neo
Junior Member

since 2007-08-08

Posts 13

2 posted 2007-08-08 07:04 PM

"Come to my dreams and stop the time,
Let know you're here, my angel, fallen.
You've broken your wings - I'd give you mine,
And give you hope, from you once stolen."

I cried at these lines, and it's so meaningful to how my life is, there are few that get that, thank you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-08-08 07:11 PM

Nice indeed...James

littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

4 posted 2007-08-08 07:38 PM

It was beautiful. It certaintly tugged at my heart. Amazing i love seeing peoples passion show through their work. It always makes the piece just that extra wonderful.

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

5 posted 2007-08-20 09:49 AM

Thank you all a lot for taking the time to read!
It's for the one, that's why it's so emotional...

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