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Solitary Heaven |
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Neo Junior Member
since 2007-08-08
Posts 13 |
My heart bled this morning and dawn was silent as the sun; my place the tomb of God, my mind like a fabric of light torn by the stark darkness inside the house of blood beneath my skin of diamonds. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like an abrupt wakeup from a fantastical dream... I enjoyed this. Welcome to Passions, Neo. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting... and thank you for your response to my poem. Write on! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Nice first post Welcome to pip |
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littlefairy Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51New York |
"my mind like a fabric of light torn by the stark darkness inside the house of blood beneath my skin of diamonds." Loved loved loved this. I can't even begin to explain where i started loving it. Awesome -Tara I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return. |
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Neo Junior Member
since 2007-08-08
Posts 13 |
thank you all |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Feeling the same here... enjoyed your words |
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