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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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I am the culture between my hips beyond words lifemeal of sighs & goodnights the air I breath at a stop light a relative word for revitalizing I am ocean, manifestation of life could there be dreams stalking me? are my eyes that of mona's smile? laughter of mineral springs the quintessential sound of buoyancy see me, sweet light of silent rain doorway of vein, child, middle aged queen hopeless stupidity am I romance? passion wanting more? personification swathing the floor writing journals, that i can't run away from hiding in a moment of fun infinate hues fertile with wisdom total ensign religious closets of wispy illusions waiting to swim inspirational sky that pot a gold, standing in line hues of poverty expressing emotions affection despair radiance like non compared profile designer ode to purple rain I am woman a al mode weightless mistress of days now old begging thoughts I am woman proud to be afraid to leave I am woman a root of man godess of insight swan with wingspan to be free of restriction, control I am athletic refined and polite lady designed muti functional child left behind [This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-07-2007 06:22 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"lifemeal of sighs & goodnights the air I breath at a stop light a relative word for revitalizing I am ocean, manifestation of life" Love this... the phrasing and the way ti plays on the mind... well done ma'am ... indeed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice flow of words...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this!!! And the title is perfect... for each day does bring out a different aspect of the whole. *S* Fantastic write, dear lady!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"am I romance? passion wanting more? personification swathing the floor writing journals, that i can't run away from hiding in a moment of fun" Wow! Philosophy 101. Poignant thinking, yet well grounded in the facts of life. Love this Lee J. JL  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you are ...glory...a la mode!  your poetry is effervescence, too! yes, yes, yes and no, and the no is only because you keep re-defining you! Loved this.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, every poem of yours is truly an infinite "pot a gold". Each one is alluring, sensuous, philosophical, vivid, captivating and full of golden mots. Love the poet's skin you're in!  Linda P.S. You have morphed into lovely butterfly!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I am the culture between my hips" dammit LeeJ I want this line and all the rest of them too as fine a work as I have ever read woman feast |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
With an opening line like you came up with....how on earth could I not be drawn in to this one! Great write, WOMAN!!!  ........jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LeeGal~ 'religious closets of wispy illusions waiting to swim inspirational sky' .... thoughts to *sigh* for~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful to read , full of wisdom indeed Hope |
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dawnsconstellation New Member
since 2003-03-10
Posts 3 |
Lady Lee I have missed reading your beautiful words...it's a pleasure to fall into the mesmerizing imagery that you weave into poetry again... "I am ocean, manifestation of life could there be dreams stalking me? are my eyes that of mona's smile? laughter of mineral springs the quintessential sound of buoyancy see me, sweet light of silent rain doorway of vein, child, middle aged queen hopeless stupidity am I romance? passion wanting more? personification swathing the floor writing journals, that i can't run away from hiding in a moment of fun infinate hues fertile with wisdom total ensign religious closets of wispy illusions waiting to swim inspirational sky that pot a gold, standing in line hues of poverty expressing emotions affection despair radiance like non compared profile designer ode to purple rain I am woman a al mode weightless mistress of days now old begging thoughts I am woman proud to be afraid to leave I am woman a root of man godess of insight swan with wingspan to be free of restriction, control I am athletic refined and polite lady designed muti functional child left behind" **hushed** This is stunning.......it's sooo good to breathe in the magic of your verses again... *Hug* ~dawn~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
.. and you are a wonder .. a beauty .. and an inspiration to me. A |
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