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Some Women
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some Women Some women seem to have so much going for themselves that I feel like a bus stop that they just used as as a place to spray on some more perfume and before the fragrance blooms they go on their way and all I was given a chance to say was "I'll miss you." JamesLee 03August 2007 |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
James~ awww...I wish I could say it gets better...but maybe we are all bustops...one way or another~ ~enjoyed this~ ~beLLe |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James.... you write words of wisdom here my sweet friend... enjoyed RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you belle and Roniece for the nice responses... I'm just missing someone special right now...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
good one...BOY...do I know the feeling!! [once again...this seems (to me at least) to be one of those good 'ol "slice of everyperson's- life dejavu" writes...I'm sure any of the fine (female) 'P.I.P.' poets could pen an effective converse (bookend/ companion) piece to this one as well!] applause!! |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Boy, do I know this feeling. I don't know what to tell you dude except maybe to drive the bus. I do know that this was nicely penned. It shows strong emotion and pain. Sorry you're hurting though, or missing that special someone. Garfield |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
How true!!! Good poem. Tomtoo |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Nice write. I am familiar with the feeling. Something about faint hearts and hot irons comes to mind. |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
Very sad.. *squeeze* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Secondhanddreampoet, ggrn3, Tom Mack, Bronzeage and BB girl for the wonderful responses...James |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
My dear James Sometimes that is all we are, a bus stop.... a resting place before moving on.. I know the feeling tooo well and I wish it could be different... but it is not... Beautiful write! Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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gwaihir Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 58Sub-tropical, USA |
James -- I think it is better to be a bus stop than to be a door mat. There is always a chance the next one will miss the bus and stay a while. |
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