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Open Poetry #41

Wanting You...Dreams

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-07-16 02:23 AM

Wanting You...Dreams

"In my heart I wanted forever...
It takes more than one persons want
to keep two sweethearts together."

I wanted to believe that you
shared the same wants as me,
but you knew the desires of your heart.
Feelings for you came easily to me,
but our feelings were far apart.

I've let go of my wanting you dreams.
Within those dreams you wanted me too.
Seems like your heart is following its dream.
Go and do what you wanted to do...

JamesLee
15July
2007

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (07-16-2007 05:48 AM).]

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-07-16 01:45 PM

sigh. life is like this. One can never control other's thought.
same as love.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-07-16 09:32 PM

powerfully emotive truth spoken here!

fine 'write'!

serious applause!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-07-17 07:36 AM

Thank you Drauntz and secondhandreampoet for the nice responses...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2007-07-18 12:30 PM

"In my heart I wanted forever...
It takes more than one persons want
to keep two sweethearts together."

Yes... yes, it does. *S*

Beautiful write!!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2007-07-20 12:24 PM

liked it

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