Open Poetry #41 |
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The Love Composition |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
The Love Composition Invigorating. Pretty, breathtaking Goddess. My every heartbeat. - Inspirational. Your ostensible beauty. You keep me writing. - Predomination. You have captured all my love. And enslaved my mind. - Multimillionaire. You bought my heart and my soul. You just took over. - Compositional. These haiku's have one message. Tell you I love you. [This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (07-14-2007 05:22 PM).] |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is very touching. As if you are writing to your muse. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful. enjoyed |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful expression....and I loved the ending, how each lead to those three words... ~~**~~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I like this THe poem flowed so well that I didn't realize they were haiku Very nice. A |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Letters in red are always passionate, even more powerful when expressed to the one you love. By the way, I like your PIP name! Loved your poem, or your composition of many "little" poems ![]() J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
A wonderful composition on the most wonderful gift of all: Love ![]() "Ah! my Be-loved, fill the Cup that clears |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Clever, and charming... Write on! |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Thank you very much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"A Love Composition" ~ indeed!!! It's brimming with your show of love and adore! ![]() Keep on loving! ~ and writing! EA ![]() |
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