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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-08-01 11:21 AM

Pass the Night

a sultry night beneath starlight
no breeze to stir the air
no cloud in sight to block the height
one single soul is there

still reaching out to feel about
searching for a spark
to light the way as if to say
‘save me from the dark’

yet none are near so none will hear
loneliness remains
close the door as times before
go to sleep again

perchance to dream so it will seem
wonderful and bright
without a care so peaceful there
calmly pass the night

MoonShadow
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2007-08-01 01:06 PM

Beautiful...

I am enjoying your contributions very much.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-08-01 05:05 PM

Nice writing...James

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2007-08-01 05:43 PM

a sad night!

Tom

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-08-01 07:58 PM

gentle Sir Moonshadow
a heartbreaking work
beautiful and delicate as jasmine petals

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2007-08-01 08:02 PM

Felt the touch of this one stir on the breeze sir....melancholy the winds blow...

nicely done, sir.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

6 posted 2007-08-03 12:36 PM

You touched my heart
This is sadly beautiful
It's haunting

A

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

7 posted 2007-08-04 08:14 AM

   Susan... I am most grateful and invite you to read your fill.

   James and Tom... Thank you for your read and reply.

   Kate... the perception is breathtaking when viewed through the heart. Your kind words are heartfelt.

   GS and Aziza... meloncholy the winds do blow and pleased that this has touched you so. Thank you for your kind response... most encouraging.

trekkergirl
New Member

since 2007-08-05

Posts 5

8 posted 2007-08-05 11:15 AM

Nice I definitely like the way this shows loneliness which is a fav topic of mine to write about.

Good work

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

9 posted 2007-08-07 07:45 AM

Trekkergirl... It is a condition that Romantics often find themselves in, unfortunately. Thank you for your kind response.

MoonShadow
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