Open Poetry #41 |
Bountiful Life |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lush arborvitae share spaces with trailing domestics of Fuschia, Jasmine, Honeysuckle. Deep viridian fern fronds spread lacy fingertips as they meander wooded paths gracefully highlighting miles of highway, while scraggly survivalist branches of native wind-swept cypress limbs dangle precariously over rocky cliffs, clinging tenaciously to mighty Pacific ledges above a thunderous crashing sea. A solitary pelican swoops, swiftly scoops a bountiful meal. Blue jays screech territorial tunes from nearby towering pines as rambunctious squirrels scurry seeking fallen treasures. In the presence of Gaia's diversity, my spirit ascends with each rising salt spray, soars above the trees and beyond the purest Vincent cobalt sky adorned with Titanium white cumulus. Diversity in Chaos rules. Terra Firma is but one dimension of the vast expansiveness, Universal Life. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I love every single word of your wondrous work of art! A keeper! love Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Terra Firma is but one dimension of the vast expansiveness, Universal Life. yes it is the tao of your poem draws my awe |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, ladies, for sharing your time and replies! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"while scraggly survivalist branches of native wind-swept cypress limbs dangle precariously over rocky cliffs, clinging tenaciously to mighty Pacific ledges above a thunderous crashing sea." Three more weeks until I visit the Oregon coast again, and I can't wait! Your writing just put me there, so naturally. I always love to read you. ~K |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You describe the most beautiful place on Terre Firma as no one else could. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
It would be rather impossible to improve on the appropriate comments about this grand ‘Universalist’ write (celebrating “Gaia’s magnificent diversity) already posted by other fine ‘P.I.P.’ word-painters!… ergo, I will say only that I am especially fond of imagery such as: “viridian fern fronds spread(ing) lacy fingertips” [gracefully meandering wooded paths]; “survivalist…native wind-swept cypress” [above that thunderously crashing sea]; “the purest Vincent cobalt sky adorned with Titanium white cumulus.” Very serious and long-sustained applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A humble thank you, dear friends. Nature always provides me with plenty of food for thought, though lately some of it...effects of global warming, specifically, is difficult to swallow. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
As Margherita said, 'it is a work of art,' you've put a lot of thought into that very expressive poem. great write much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You write such beauty. A |
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