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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia

0 posted 2008-01-23 03:51 PM



On a bus headed south
Felico Hernandez is so confused

He has no collar
He has no tags

Goodbye Felix
You misguided fool

You take things too literally

Thinking you could come
to the
"Land of the Free"

and just roam about

unleashed

Ha !   Such a dreamer

Felico Hernandez is so confused

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2008-01-24 07:06 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-01-24 07:30 PM


Yo XOx Uriah xOX,

Felix has decided to stay.  He likes it here.  

Bobby

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2008-01-24 08:40 PM


good thing he stays


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2008-01-25 07:46 AM


You caught this dramatic situation well ... there are so many who risk death (and many who actually do die) in the attempt of realizing their dream of freedom. But when they finally arrive in the countries of their dreams, reality is quite different from what they hoped it would be.... often they are sent back to cope with situations that are even worse than before, as there is nothing to go back to. "Confusion" seems almost a mild expression for what they really go through. (complex problems!!)

thank you for this

love
Margherita

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