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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Snow glows In the light Of a January moon Beyond the sound Of cars on the road There is little if anything To be heard The leafless branches Do not move Neighborhood houses Are dark and still Peace has come Of its own free will And nothing at all To do with you . |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Objectivisim. How true a description of natural way. A beautiful poem Until I was chilled Natural has its own way of peace Man has its own way of war Tomtoo  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I have to say! Tuesday is my least fav day, because it it always the longest for me! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The world seems pretty peaceful without the interference of humans. I get it. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery...grand ending!: "Peace has come Of its own free will And nothing at all To do with you(!)" serious and sustained applause!! |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
Loved it. Everything is alright, but humans still feel the need to interfere with almost every little thing. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Huan Yi, No, nothing can be done about it. Your poem brings back bad memories. The cold is heartless and cruel. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
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