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blue bamboo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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this island of blue bamboo like a lady in velvet she seems to drift my sea the long ships are restless for the frothing of morning but my soul still lingers at the fingers of the helm for a whisper perhaps from hades to stir my sail skins of male arousal of a mistress wind with bosom bow she is jaunty bruising my shoulders she yearns to spend me in the pyre of sirens ___________ daark |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
This is beautiful. One of my favorite of yours. beautiful. Tom |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that is how the sea should be seen by everyone, then we would all have a smile on our faces.  Loved it! I won't be looking at the ocean the same again, or bamboo in the wind either. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend Tom...thank you so much ___________ ms myst...thank you for the view of my view |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful words ARCTIC WIND |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahh D, she is smiling and lingering in the velvet of your words. You paint her here, beautiful. Very much enjoyed the lovely...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
artic, thank you for the read ____________ ms gs, thanks lady friend |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Again, I smile. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, your smile warms me..thanks babe |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, words to cuddle into! Outstanding Dark one. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha....love it!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms diamond, thank you lady ___________ ms suesea, thanks babe, for the touch and smile |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
the long ships are restless for the frothing of morning but my soul still lingers at the fingers of the helm for a whisper perhaps from hades to stir my sail skins of male I learned three new words here ... and the vision I get is very captivating. love Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you for watching this dance of tides. _________ ms vandana, thank you ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I return to the island of blue bamboo. The words are lovely to just bask in. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali..please stay here for as long as you wish to..thanks ms |
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