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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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0 posted 2008-01-23 03:46 AM



Drive up.


He used to think –he’ll drive up.
One morning
Seeing a shining sun
He will drive up.
No girl friend, it is too personal.

Through the winding dirt road
Meandering amid meadows.
Long and weary,
The villages to and fro,
He has saw
The dust and ash in the heads of green sycamores
He
Will drive up.
He used to think –he’ll drive up.
One morning.
Up north, wherefrom his father
Has traveled to setup a home here
Up north where his old man
Dreamed to die.

A pond
Ten pairs of chicken
Oh, never forget king and queen-
The ducks.

He used to think –he’ll drive up.
One morning.

Only this fine morning
Like all other fine mornings
He has to work on 5 more cars.
Garage’ll close at 6 o’clock
She will come by the road to the slum.
Another days anal gone to liquidation.

And, he has no car.




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TomMark
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1 posted 2008-01-23 12:02 PM


very good . love the reading.
Tom

simon
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2 posted 2008-01-23 12:24 PM


Really interesting reading. Liked a lot...
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