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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I always did wonder of your evenings when you put your mind there in that other room of seclusion by the window that looks away when you picked a book's whispers and let them wear your skin as you would pretend behind your eyes that you were the gypsy's pen sometimes I was gravel outside dragging my own feet for noise so you would press to the glass and bosom my eyes with searching as you listened to the winds song and the rustling of my leavery wondering of a handsome prince or perhaps even a wicked king not knowing we were all in the shadows ___________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Absolutely awesome, dear D.! love Margherita  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
When the gypsy of you wanders it is such a beautiful thing. Lovely write d. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
as you listened to the winds song and the rustling of my leavery wondering of a handsome prince or perhaps even a wicked king not knowing we were all in the shadows mmmm... a handsome prince OR a wicked king... can I have both please? enjoyed this Mr Daark... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
indeed this was a wonderful poem. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend for the touch and smile. _____________ ms gs, thank you donna for touching this one ____________ ms r & b, my my my....a threesome? do you play? golf I mean, thanks ms ________________ friend tom/mark, thank you sir for the read |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
love it when you speak of gypsies...  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I play left handed Mr Daark... but very very poorly! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe, they are my favorite spinners of gold ____________ ms r & b, I imagine your approach is sensual and that your short game is wickedly charming. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This reads like a wonderful story - or a picture that is just out of reach but can be seen ... or like words that flow into a song. A |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Ok... one more fix before sleep. You have magic in you, Dark. Thank you for letting it out to breathe all that beautiful over us. ~Caroline~ P.S. - no one can accuse me of not inhaling - no no no - I mean the beautiful! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, thank you lady!!, it is nice to have you along on my pendrizzle ___________ ms ice, thank you for taking a tour, your comments were a pleasure |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Yesssssss, Indeed, A fine lovely Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you artic.. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I guess I would have to agree that the last stanza packs a wallop. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks EB |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Such beautiful poetic architecture here.. loved this! ~Amaryllis |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you much ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, it's a good thing when today's topics of the archives reach back to the present... for a present it is. I like this very much: quote: I like it...because I know.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks pretty sun... |
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