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Where is your home now?
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Where is your home now? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Fours walls of silent judgment, breathing crude innuendos at my back stabbing at my spine with splintered nails The hall is endless nothing to light the way except the blind of familiar circumstance and what's left of common sense Bleeding tiny little particles of DNA plumped with bereaved cells of use to be hope I expect stumble, I welcome the pain recognizing my part, my non-part, my retarded need Resentment without words regret without hope disappoint without a point Homeless with a home I am not where I am supposed to be "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Resentment without words regret without hope disappoint without a point Homeless with a home I am not where I am supposed to be" ~ Susan, this aches. This truly aches. You are such an expressive writer. How could a reader not feel your pain. Giving you a warm, loving, compassionate hug, Linda  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Whew! I can relate to so much and especially to the ending. An extremely fine and expressive write! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Yes Indeed, very EXpressvie Writting ARCTIC WIND |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a brand new year and it's gonna be better for all of us than it was last year you will find where you are supposed to be, strong people don't let a little blindness stand in their way  common sense combined with inner strength is a force to be reckoned with! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I hear deep cries in these words, and can only offer warm healing thoughts to help comfort your spirit, and those of loved ones lost in the shadows. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Deep anxiety and pain are tangible in your words, dear Susan. I am sorry you are going through such a black tunnel, may your heart heal and let the light in again. We go through continuous change, burdens become lighter while we move ahead. Love and hugs, beautiful heart. Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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