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Hypnotic Waves
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Hypnotic Waves |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
HypnoticWaves Double doors left parted please To hear the waves hypnotic peace Leaving prone upon these sheets Myself, played as strings, in harmony meets Coming and leaving The breath of soft surf speaking Lullaby in tides so like me Froth of silver sounds in rapsody The curtains make applause Trembling bells to chime, then pause My hair stirred in satin tune Warm as touch beneath a vintage moon As I quiver, following each strum The wind continues on and on My thoughts of you soothe as song Thus is instrumental, swells of linger on Copyright Kkh 1/20/08 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
YEP, this qualifies....beyond a doubt, love the words, the picture it puts in the mind. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I love lines and images such as: harmonious waves of hypnotic peace; “The breath of soft surf speaking” “…silver sounds in rhapsody”; “…touch beneath a vintage moon”; Applause! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The curtains make applause Trembling bells to chime, then pause My hair stirred in satin tune Warm as touch beneath a vintage moon Fantastic romantic imagery, dear TD! love Margherita |
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