Ethereal Pain /:\ Spiritual Tears

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Open Poetry #41

Ethereal Pain /:\ Spiritual Tears

Thalen
Junior Member

since 2007-12-15

Posts 35
New Jersey, USA

0 posted 2008-01-20 10:56 AM

Ethereal Pain /:\ Spiritual Tears

Roots dig, stabbing into my heart from to my chest,
As loneliness once again burns my breast.
Tears Ethereal in being, flee my eyes.
Facades of ghostly emotions,
Leave my firm stoic face.

If you could see the desolation you cause
On my soul and fragile being,
Would you speak your spite to me?

You refuse to see,
Why should you be family?

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2008-01-20 11:51 AM

Kieran, Such an emotive write, and yet holding back.
I understand this all too well, the crushing ache inside.
Your poem speaks volumes to me. Well expressed.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-01-20 06:12 PM

Delicate, yet the sharp pain is felt.
Familiar family situations!

Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-01-20 07:03 PM

Nice writing...James

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

4 posted 2008-01-20 08:33 PM

wonderful piece.
enjoyed
Tom

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