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Thalen
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since 2007-12-15
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0 posted 2008-01-20 10:56 AM



Ethereal Pain /:\ Spiritual Tears

Roots dig, stabbing into my heart from to my chest,
As loneliness once again burns my breast.
Tears Ethereal in being, flee my eyes.
Facades of ghostly emotions,
Leave my firm stoic face.

If you could see the desolation you cause
On my soul and fragile being,
Would you speak your spite to me?

You refuse to see,
Why should you be family?

© Copyright 2008 Kieran Thomas Maye - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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1 posted 2008-01-20 11:51 AM


Kieran, Such an emotive write, and yet holding back.
I understand this all too well, the crushing ache inside.
Your poem speaks volumes to me. Well expressed.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2008-01-20 06:12 PM


Delicate, yet the sharp pain is felt.
Familiar family situations!


Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2008-01-20 07:03 PM


Nice writing...James
TomMark
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4 posted 2008-01-20 08:33 PM


wonderful piece.
enjoyed
Tom

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