No sir that girl is not a mad.

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Open Poetry #41

No sir that girl is not a mad.

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15

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india

0 posted 2008-01-19 09:28 AM

No sir that girl is not a mad.

No sir that girl is not a mad.
Please sir, let her respite,
She will leave your life.
A life madder than her,
Madder than this world.
I am here to take her with
To a place where she belong,
A private wing for her
To fly high, higher.
A garden of purple daffodil,
A ride on milky unicorn.

With me, come girl.
Sir, send your papers to me
I shall

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

1 posted 2008-01-19 10:54 AM

Oh, this is extremely poignant ...

A private wing for her
To fly high, higher.
A garden of purple daffodil,
A ride on milky unicorn.

Though probably a few words are missing in the end, I loved this very much.

Beautiful and moving.

love
Margherita

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-01-19 12:34 PM

beautiful and full of emotion.
love this one
Tom

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-01-19 04:15 PM

Enjoyed...James

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-01-19 04:20 PM

Wonderful writing...James

simon
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since 2008-01-14

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5 posted 2008-01-19 06:55 PM

I really enjoyed this......

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