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Pachabels Loops |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The softness of the snow tonight Perpetuates a song too deep Making known its vehemence to be written Freed into the cold white air, and wrung Turned until the millionth tear has dried Dusting my memory with sensations so far away No, it is not pain, once numbed in an empty wind Nor would I wake it, to be longing Pachabels loops lightly in the background Silently staring, in harmony to the drifts Holding myself warm in waiting The night sky is stark and noble As I light linen candles and remember Copyright Kkh 1/18/08 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, Kathleen, what beauty you share! Immensely touching. love Margherita |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This really is very good: "Holding myself warm in waiting The night sky is stark and noble As I light linen candles and remember" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I must agree with Icebox. Such beauty written so elegantly. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
always beautiful poems. enjoyed Tomtoo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, lovely write. I particularly like "No, it is not pain, once numbed in an empty wind Nor would I wake it, to be longing" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Grand potpourri of images here!: Song freed into cold white air; Memory dusted with far away sensations; Pachabel’s drifting harmony; Stark and noble Wintry night skies; Remebrances by candlelight; etc. Applause!! |
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