Open Poetry #41 |
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Felix The Thief |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Felix is young and hungry. He’s walking down a side street where there’s no traffic. He’s hungry. Felix is looking through car windows, and testing each car door to see if it will open. He’s hungry. Felix is a thief. He doesn’t feel bad about being a thief. He’s more concerned about being hungry. He’s hungry Bobby |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
There;s nothing left to say that I haven't already said... |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Good. and "moral shall never go in front of hunger" Tomtoo |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Simon, Thanks for the kind words. I’m pleased you liked it. Tomtoo, That’s exactly right. The human body is holy and sacred. It must be cared for and taken care of to the best of a person’s ability. It's an obligation. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Nothing needs to be added indeed, your words are impressive, dear Bobby. Hunger is maybe the strongest drive that we can feel. love Margherita |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the powerful saga of Felix continues!... ...and so does the applause of an appreciative audience!! |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, Isn't it though. It can make you sick, and crazy. I don't want to go there again. Midnitesun, Thank you so much for the very kind words. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I love your Felix stories Bobby, I truly do! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce, Thanks love, for the very kind words. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoy the Felix stories very much. Ida |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, Thanks for reading them, and I glad you enjoy them. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Felix struggles may be heartbreaking but they are enjoyable to read. |
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