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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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0 posted 2008-01-18 10:46 AM



Monday

A problem arose...
There was no food to eat

and so...
I went outside
To be alone
and pray that God
would grant my needs...

and while I was on the ground
with bent knees and bowed head...
I picked some salad
and dug some worms.

I boiled and ate the salad
Then went fishing

Tonight...
I will dine on my catch
while I wait for God's response.

Tuesday

A problem arose...
The cat's food bowl
was becoming empty
much too quickly.

I discovered that a mouse
had been stealing the cat's food.

Sometimes from the bag
Sometimes from the bowl

and had been storing it
in the corner of a kitchen drawer.

and so...
I placed the drawer
on the floor
and began using it
as a secondary food bowl

I have not seen the mouse since.
Perhaps he has moved away.

But...
One bowl or the other
always has food.

Wednesday

A problem arose...
I began missing my mandolin
after having to sell it.
I had spent many hours
plucking it's eight strings.

and so...
I comforted myself
by playing the ukulele
with my eyes crossed.

Thursday

A problem arose...
The doorbell was broken

and so...
I substituted the broken doorbell
with a photograph of a butterfly.
If you touch it's wings...
It lets out a scream.

and even though the screaming
cannot be heard by human ears...

The butterfly is much prettier
than the broken doorbell...
and works every bit as good.

Friday

I sit in thought...
waiting for the next
problem to arise...
For this is the place
where they always appear.

© Copyright 2008 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
simon
Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440
London, England
1 posted 2008-01-18 11:04 AM


Right. This is getting boring. Every time you post something I absolutly LOVE it!!!

You always make me think of Charles Bukowski- one of my favourite writers.

Don't know if this is intentional but it is a compliment indeed.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-01-18 12:13 PM


You succeed in producing a great impact with your poems and this is no exception.

love
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-01-18 12:44 PM


Well, you certainly know how to solve problems
....and write poetry.
                                      Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-01-19 02:49 AM


oh I did enjoy this! problem solving at its best! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
5 posted 2008-01-19 04:28 PM


Simon

I had not heard of Bukowski...so I did a quick search.   I still need  ha  (((need)))  to look at some of his "works"...but I did see that he was considered "The Poet Laureate of Skid Row".

Yes, Quite a compliment!    ::smiles::

Maybe I will one day be "The Poet Laureate of the Hollow"    or such

Thank you for your replies.
They are sought and craved and cherished.

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
6 posted 2008-01-19 04:32 PM


Thank you all for taking the time to read...and  respond.   My "writing" and the "response" are very closely related.   When one ceases...so does the other.   ::shrugs::    Go figure
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