Open Poetry #41 |
The Funeral |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Close the door softly and walk away. A chapter of your life has closed today. Somewhere in the future, the door will open again And the ones you've been missing will welcome you in. Ida Werrett [This message has been edited by Marchmadness (01-17-2008 11:45 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I do like this... you have expressed it well.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ida, a hope to cherish and to believe in! Beautifully expressed. love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very tender goodbye, Ida. Thanks for sharing this soft beauty. |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Beautiful... |
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Im not a poet and i no it Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 14uk, peterborough |
within the week i went to my friends funeral...so little text alot of meaning...thank you nice writing =] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, Ida, I do believe you are right. Well said. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very nicely expressed... thank you love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Ida that is such a touching verse. Loved it Lindsay |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yanno, what I wish about my own funeral is that I could hear the Eulogy before they close the lid...I have seriously thought about writing a poem to be read during the service. Excellent thinker of a write. |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, There you go hon. This is nice work. I like it. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank You all so much for your wonderful comments, although I am not much for religion, I firmly believe that the soul does not die. Ida |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Ida, I believe much like you do - and I really like this poem. Alison |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Its never candy and puppies to say goodBye to some one! ARCTIC WIND |
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