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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-01-16 09:35 PM


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The wind now cold
On leafless branches

The hills and fields
Whatever one sees
Is buried in snow

It was because
Where and whenever
She walked into a room
She changed the world

What more
Do you need
To know


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-01-16 10:06 PM


sweet !!!
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-01-17 01:49 AM


Very touching.
          Ida

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2008-01-17 05:47 PM


I'd love for someone to think that of me~~

Nice...

M

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-01-18 04:14 AM


I think you have said it all John... very nice   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

TomMark
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5 posted 2008-01-18 01:22 PM


Of course I love this one. Always beautiful poems.

PS, Is she a painter?
Tomtoo

Bob K
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6 posted 2008-01-18 06:42 PM


Dear Huan Yi,
Buried in snow

The fields, the hills
Whatever one sees
The leafless branches:

Whenever she walked into a room
She changed the world.


     These lines rise up for me out of the others and they haven't reproached me so much as many of my rethinkings have.  Do you have any thoughts about this?
BobK.

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