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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The wind now cold On leafless branches The hills and fields Whatever one sees Is buried in snow It was because Where and whenever She walked into a room She changed the world What more Do you need To know . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sweet !!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very touching. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'd love for someone to think that of me~~ Nice... M |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
 I think you have said it all John... very nice love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Of course I love this one. Always beautiful poems. PS, Is she a painter? Tomtoo |
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Bob K Member Elite
since 2007-11-03
Posts 4208 |
Dear Huan Yi, Buried in snow The fields, the hills Whatever one sees The leafless branches: Whenever she walked into a room She changed the world. These lines rise up for me out of the others and they haven't reproached me so much as many of my rethinkings have. Do you have any thoughts about this? BobK. |
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