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Im not a poet and i no it
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since 2008-01-15
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uk, peterborough

0 posted 2008-01-15 01:33 PM



A bright and beautiful glow
we stare up and never know
stories songs and stares
the little shining star is still their

day and night we pray
we cant see the star during the day
do we need the stars
but as pretty as they are, they are very far

When were scared we look at the stars
is it for comfort or trying to spot a shooting star
a star is a wonderful piece of art
to draw an exact star you must be smart.

Is a star the one and only god
or do we see it as a splodge
the shining star we will never know
the star we see were all below

Leigh-Ann

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1 posted 2008-01-16 12:53 PM


Leigh-Ann

I like stars too.

Alison

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