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benjamin106 Junior Member
since 2008-01-05
Posts 10 |
I wrote this this morning, January 15th, i'd love to know what you think  What happens next when all the lights go out and everyone’s eyes close does dawn come or does life begin all over again Waking up to silence wondering if you are real touching your skin looking at your hand feeling a warm tear falling on your cheek. A new day is born filling the sky up with white and pink clouds breathing the sweet air just to know that you are there. When you go to sleep at night thinking about tomorrow Just know that whatever happens next you will always be in my prayers. BP 08 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Every day is indeed a new beginning ... oh but during sleep we soul travel and are restored from all the challenges of past days and prepared for those of every new day. (my belief) I love your thoughts. Well done. love Margherita |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
benjamin106, It is a little difficult to ko=now just who is speaping here. Other than that, is okay. Bobby |
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