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benjamin106
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since 2008-01-05
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0 posted 2008-01-15 09:26 AM



I wrote this this morning, January 15th, i'd love
to know what you think

What happens next
when all the lights go out
and everyone’s eyes close
does dawn come
or does life begin all over again


Waking up to silence
wondering if you are real
touching your skin
looking at your hand
feeling a warm tear falling on your cheek.


A new day is born
filling the sky
up with white and pink clouds
breathing the sweet air
just to know that you are there.


When you go to sleep at night
thinking about tomorrow
Just know that
whatever happens next
you will always be in my prayers.

BP 08


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-01-15 10:38 AM


Every day is indeed a new beginning ... oh but during sleep we soul travel and are restored from all the challenges of past days and prepared for those of every new day. (my belief)

I love your thoughts.

Well done.

love
Margherita

Bobby Jordan
Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-01-15 10:46 AM


benjamin106,

It is a little difficult to ko=now just who is speaping here.

Other than that, is okay.

Bobby

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