Open Poetry #41 |
I Am |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I Am One day I will make my life what I wish for it to be, for today, it's good enough to live it just as me. I am not rich, I have no power nor have I many friends, I have no lover steady mine but I have the love each one lends. I am older and tighter in my jeans, losing my hair and youthful skin and I have scars of experience but I know I can begin again. I am nonchalant and yawning, more than ready for something new, I am capable and set for battle so bring me a cause or two. I am a smoker, I am a drinker, I am a feeler, I am a thinker, I am a bleeder, I am sad, I am the best you've ever had. One day I will make my life what I wish for it to be, but it's no rush, I'm doing well as long as you're in love with me. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
honest (very 'real') interesting write! applause! |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
Honest to the bone. That's tough to write for some. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful Dixie... wonderful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As you well know, I've been watching your writing for some time now... and this is as good as a poet can get when she leans into lean and know where's the net.... I'm proud of you... and for all you've come through. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hugs from afar , as a friend , I love you just the way you are Hope |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are wonderfully alive, dear Dixie, and I love you in this process of being who you are. Powerful write, again you show your heart and its song with great honesty and skill. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
passing shadows, Very good work on this. It's interesting, and well written. Bobby |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Your poems are so empowering. They are just great. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks ya'll |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You made me smile again and I think you are a very strong woman. Alison |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
honest and to the point just like i like em from you |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I hope I am counted as one of those friends. This is a wonderful write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to read this...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just stay strong...you will make it M |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
quote: Perhaps the words that hit the closest to home. This entire piece was absolutely awesome. Thank you for writing it. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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