Open Poetry #41 |
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possession sound |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
just in passing we were other rivers with out sleeves touching we both saw the sun side of heaven but called it different names you said I made you uncomfortable with your eyes at times because of your possession and heart sound words of proper but they always did look back and your smile made you stronger as you realized you were a window and I didn't have any hands and my eyes told you secrets too how you made me feel uncomfortable because of your possession and heart sound words of proper but I called it just an addiction _____________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this one Mr Daark... hits my heart love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R & B..gently I hope,,,thanks babe for touching |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Well done. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
addiction for sure ![]() enjoyed this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend clang, thank you much ____________ ms suesea, thanks lady friend.. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Makes one wonder what all the uncomfortable is trying to hide. Know what I mean? I love this. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, sometimes it is just hard to let one's self do what one wants I guess..thanks ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and my eyes told you secrets too how you made me feel uncomfortable because of your possession and heart sound words of proper but I called it just an addiction Sometimes it could be the sun side of heaven in the way the other understands it, couldn't it? A question of self-confidence maybe too. You always have a master touch to bring your message through. love Margherita ![]() |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
This one made me smile. Addiction, I hear ya... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks babe for touching this one _________ tonyV, thanks my friend and welcome to the piprooms |
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