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gypsy in gata eyes |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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and then those times when I imagine you in black with your nails done and your hair down restless when I am a voyeur sky looking back at your eyes when your soul has large windows and you smile with your voice I am stone paths then secret places for thought feet when yours are bare tiptoes and you just go for walks wondering of the other places that the gypsies speak of where romantics are all cards and you can pick them blindfolded but you prefer your eyes open __________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"when I am a voyeur sky looking back at your eyes when your soul has large windows and you smile with your voice"  loved this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks lady for the look in. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This just makes me wanna dance by a fire in the moonlight DarkDaddy.  This is one of your finest. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just beautiful Mr Daark....  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thank you so much ms _____________ ms r & b, thanks to you for the read and smile |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am stone paths then secret places for thought feet when yours are bare tiptoes and you just go for walks pure delight! It would be such a pity if we kept our eyes closed, missing your treasures! Poesia stupenda! Do you hear the melodious sound of these Italian words? love Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you for the touch and words...you bless me ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You manage to touch on worldly areas where one can be on a path's way in any corner of the world, knowing that you know her corner, alone. Well done, Sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, you often wear black with your replies and you have the wind at your ankles too..thanks hon |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
well...reading this just drives me crazy  |
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Kamelian Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 21Australia |
Beautiful & delicate. |
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xrobxscottx Junior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 31United States |
I daresay that this was very vivid, and I enjoyed it immensely. I'll be looking forward to whatever you post next. "Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time." |
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tonyV Junior Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 36 |
Not sure why, but this gives me a sense of relaxation. Nicely done. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
D I thought that was a star looking down from the sky - but now, I'll look up into the blackness broken by a twinkle .. and I'll wonder. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kahlil, thank you so much for the smile sides. _____________ kame' thank you and welcome to the piptown _______________ xrob' thanks for the read and reply, hope you enjoy the piptown crew _____________ tonyV, thank you for the read ________________ ms az, you make me smile lady friend, thank you |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh I LOVE the images in this one. Well done! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am stone paths then secret places for thought feet when yours are bare tiptoes and you just go for walks... and a very nice path needed at times  M |
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