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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-01-13 08:46 AM



and then those times
when I imagine you in black
with your nails done
and your hair down restless

when I am a voyeur sky
looking back at your eyes
when your soul has large windows
and you smile with your voice

I am stone paths then
secret places for thought feet
when yours are bare tiptoes
and you just go for walks

wondering of the other places
that the gypsies speak of
where romantics are all cards
and you can pick them blindfolded

but you prefer your eyes open


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daark


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1 posted 2008-01-13 11:07 AM



"when I am a voyeur sky
looking back at your eyes
when your soul has large windows
and you smile with your voice"



loved this

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-01-13 11:20 AM


ms suesea, thanks lady for the look in.
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2008-01-13 01:10 PM


This just makes me wanna dance by a fire in the moonlight DarkDaddy. This is one of your finest.  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-01-13 05:10 PM


just beautiful Mr Daark.... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-01-14 06:44 AM


ms gs, thank you so much ms


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ms r & b, thanks to you for the read and smile

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-01-14 10:06 AM


I am stone paths then
secret places for thought feet
when yours are bare tiptoes
and you just go for walks


pure delight! It would be such a pity if we kept our eyes closed, missing your treasures!

Poesia stupenda! Do you hear the melodious sound of these Italian words?

love
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-01-14 05:10 PM


ms mar, thank you for the touch and words...you bless me ms
Sunshine
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8 posted 2008-01-14 11:47 PM


You manage to touch on worldly areas
where one can be on a path's way
in any corner of the world,
knowing that you know
her corner,
alone.

Well done, Sir.


Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-01-15 06:20 AM


ms sun, you often wear black with your replies
and you have the wind at your ankles too..thanks hon

Kahlil
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10 posted 2008-01-15 09:38 PM


well...reading this
just drives me crazy

Kamelian
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11 posted 2008-01-15 10:09 PM


Beautiful & delicate.
xrobxscottx
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12 posted 2008-01-15 10:40 PM


I daresay that this was very vivid, and I enjoyed it immensely. I'll be looking forward to whatever you post next.

"Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time."

-Robert Wilson

tonyV
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13 posted 2008-01-15 10:44 PM


Not sure why, but this gives me a sense of relaxation.
Nicely done.

aziza
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14 posted 2008-01-16 12:57 PM


D

I thought that was a star looking down from the sky  -  but now, I'll look up into the blackness broken by a twinkle .. and I'll wonder.

A

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 2008-01-16 06:44 AM


ms kahlil, thank you so much for the smile sides.

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kame' thank you and welcome to the piptown

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xrob' thanks for the read and reply, hope you enjoy the piptown crew

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tonyV, thank you for the read
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ms az, you make me smile lady friend, thank you

Pilgrimage
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16 posted 2008-01-16 05:04 PM


Oh I LOVE the images in this one.  Well done!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

nakdthoughts
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17 posted 2008-01-16 05:41 PM


I am stone paths then
secret places for thought feet
when yours are bare tiptoes
and you just go for walks...

and a very nice path needed at times

M

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