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Open Poetry #41

'Talk Against Time'

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-07-30 08:24 PM

   ‘Talk Against Time’

Soft-ebony clouds…
tease a fine crescent moon
against a twilight-azure
  and tangerine sky,
above the crumble-down
  castle walls...
that could not
‘talk against time!’

Hyaunt
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since 2007-07-12

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1 posted 2007-07-30 08:54 PM

truly nice!!

Hyaunt

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2 posted 2007-07-30 10:38 PM

another nice read very descriptive, i think you would be very good at a short poem story deal, looking forward to reading more

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

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3 posted 2007-07-31 11:08 AM

Lovely and poignant images!

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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4 posted 2007-08-03 12:58 PM

Wonder what it would say if it could.
Beautiful.

A

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

5 posted 2007-08-03 08:07 AM

Perhaps, a slice of ripe melon-collie moon?
(grin, you know that timeless joke already)

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