Open Poetry #41 |
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Thoughts from Two Worlds(transcribed) |
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dragoon Junior Member
since 2008-01-09
Posts 19 |
Its a Tolemyday and my friends are out A warm and breezy Pegdonia night Pegdonia's satellite the Androdome takes stage Looking at the stars for some insight I wonder if theres life out there My telescope nearby I place to my eye Piercing towards Cassiopiea, that blue dot I see I wonder if someone is staring back at me. Its Friday and my friends are out A warm and breezy Earth night Earths satellite the moon takes stage Looking at the stars for some insight I wonder if theres life out there My telescope nearby I place to my eye Piercing towards Pegasus, that green dot I see I wonder if someone is staring back at me. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
this is a beautiful poem. enjoyed the read and I like the style. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice write. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I wonder if theres life out there My telescope nearby I place to my eye Piercing towards Pegasus, that green dot I see I wonder if someone is staring back at me. Wonderful and totally after my heart! There is nothing more fascinating than to look through a telescope in a clear night ... even without telescope of course we can still be in total awe and ask those questions, but it is a big emotion to see the stars more clearly. I remember my goosebumps when I first saw Saturn's rings ... love, Margherita ![]() |
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dragoon Junior Member
since 2008-01-09
Posts 19 |
Thank you all. dragoon |
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