Open Poetry #41 |
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Pleasured Heights |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pleasured Heights Pacing, caged footsteps stagger gait Laying wait, of freedom’s satin touch Moving through me fire storm Every breath, born of desire warm Insatiable, the rise and fall Whirling dervish to recall Higher, ever higher The plains below On wings bestow inspire Pacing, long awaited change Entwine of mind the fullest range And songs that resonate the flesh Lifting voice renewed and fresh As fruit, so succulent and ripe Juices flow, as liquid fire in delight A mountain scene, and seen to rise Of grace to tender spark my eyes For love was pent, held incontent Until the moment you were sent And journeys meld the pop of fission high Pacing corridors, in urgent cry Then take the sun, submerged inside For you reclaim the sky, once earth denied Copyright Kkh 1/10/08 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh! You do have a beautiful way with words! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
love this romantic look.....beautifully painted as always..... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think of Noah and the ark when I read parts of this....anywhoo, very well written, and your rhyme is superbly placed, as always... Hi KIddo.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful write, TD! True inspirational heights. love, Margherita |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
You so masterfully construct these beauties, so beautifully worded in sound and imagery. I enjoyed reading this aloud and hearing it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful, Kathleen. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, your words do indeed paint a beautiful picture. |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
In a very sensual mood, I had to come back to read this again, and copy it for times when I feel too lonely. Jaime |
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