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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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0 posted 2008-01-09 01:56 PM

Rugged Terrain

Do you know what you're in for?
Do you comprehend this at all?
Do you understand the steepness of it
when you climb upside this wall?

Do you know how deep it is
or how rough the current can get?
Can you tell how broken the bottom is
and there's no way for you to sit?

Do you see the miles of me,
the storms of lightning and rain?
Can you map the way to my heart
over my world of rugged terrain?

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

1 posted 2008-01-09 04:02 PM

I love the messages in your poems. They are all so great and this one is no exception.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-01-09 05:03 PM

your heart is very open Dixie... we love you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gunslinger
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 901
TX, USA

3 posted 2008-01-09 05:06 PM

Ah, Dix- Your poetry speaks to the soul.

SouthernJustice
Member

since 2007-12-15

Posts 159

4 posted 2008-01-10 01:51 PM

You are an..........AMAZING WOMAN!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2008-01-10 05:54 PM

good read

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2008-01-10 08:09 PM

I enjoy you "get right to the point" style of writing, Dixie. Well done.
Ida

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2008-01-11 05:41 AM

I know what's in your heart. Hope you are doing well.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2008-01-11 06:19 AM

Exceptional write, dear Dixie!

It's wise to ask!!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

9 posted 2008-01-11 02:27 PM

Your tunes are much stronger than before.
very emotional one.
enjoyed the read.
TM

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

10 posted 2008-01-13 01:44 PM

Hi Dixie, great write my friend, just keep the warmth in your heart and your arms open for friends, we all travel the rough road some days, makes us appreciate the smooth ones. Have a great day Dixie, your writing is getting better all the time, keep it up, happiness is worth the search.

Rick

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

11 posted 2008-01-13 04:02 PM

Great strength in this piece, I enjoyed it.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2008-01-13 04:13 PM

Nice writing...James

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

13 posted 2008-01-13 05:23 PM

Yes, Dixie is back with her own special brand of poetry! I'm so glad!

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