»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #41
»
the ring of ings
| Open Poetry #41 |
|
the ring of ings |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
we were lonely together there in our sandy warm seclusion innocent in our adultry it was just our hands doing it our minds were elsewhereing slowly with you feeding my temptations the pale place kind of candy that burned my mouth at times something spicy in the sprinkling of your wanting to melt me special topping nonchalantly making me crave what was down under and then there was lazy laughter that just lingered as smiles residuing our partializing with some unwrapable future when time gave us our houring ____________ daark |
||
| © Copyright 2008 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and then there was lazy laughter that just lingered as smiles but you know Mr Daark... lazy laughter and lingering smiles can sometimes be the best of all... loved this write of yours... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms R & B..yes ms, that was my intention in this..the laughter was the promise of more smiles, thanks lady |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think you are the quintessence of a nonchalant charmeur, dear D., and thank you for the smiles your poetry brings (sometimes tears too ... because under the surface of alluring words, there always lies a rare and precious psychological depth). Margherita  |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"the pale place kind of candy that burned my mouth at times" now this is "signature" you! Just popping in to remind you, that I'm almost always reading you. This took me back to a little place that no longer exists (and no, it's not my hymen  ) but a place on the Mississippi River where if you could find a vehicle that could climb the levee, there was a tiny spot of sand on the other side.We called it "Son of a Beach". Much Enjoyed this and thanks for the rewind on my memory.  |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend for looking in this set of images.. ___________ ms serene, thanks babe...it seems so many of those hymenlike places we almost ruined when we were young are now gone or turned into freeways...thanks for the eyes babe!! |
||
|
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Takes me back to a sandbar under an eleven o'clock hour sun and it reminds me of today. A |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
