Open Poetry #41 |
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Yearning for Pearls |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
Pearls, they must be pearls on the elegant slide below a woman's neck. Pearls, showering from sprinklers, tick tick tick across the nape of summer lawns where the lip of one small blade of grass quiets for a moment and welcomes the song. Pearls, so precious they are kept within a rich white cloud whose cheek lies on the mountain's top. So unquenched am I with need to open this liquid treasure, that, like all things, I thirst while waiting for the glass to be fast poured upon the restless winds to wash the air. Pearls, they must be pearls upon the brow of bronzing man, so sure of his inside sea that he attracts a glance from me. With some magic handkerchief I'd wipe the jewel made with salt and lick the curl of inner light that longs for rain tonight. Pearls, could it be, that rumble yonder in the tree and take the blood to boil hot on this sweet summer day? Pearls, it must be pearls I hear within the quiet heat, aiming for a tree and then a leaf they quiet my heart to instrument in tune; then harkening to the sky's perfume so rare I feel one fall onto my hair. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Lovely use of metaphores in graphic imagery. MoonShadow . |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful, Martie. Maybe I'll dream of pearls. Your words have been sorely missed. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine ‘write’ (especially for this Summer ‘eve!)… I especially LOVE: (precious) “Pearls… within a rich white cloud whose cheek lies on the mountain's top.”; “fast poured upon the restless winds to wash the air.”; AND: “they must be pearls upon the brow of bronzing man, so sure of his inside sea(!)” serious, sustained applause!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Love this, Martie! ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So pretty, Martiword. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Amazing. Truly a poem that reflects the beauty of the poet's soul. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
One can feel the mist in this and know the gentle touch of the writer's hand. My sister, this is so lovely... ![]() Lady Élan ~ My only sense of direction is...Up. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
sure wonderful imagery! I so enjoyed watching and feeling the images pass as I read - great Martie - Paul |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
pearls are now forever a secret smile for me...a lovely lesson from nature and a message I needed to hear today... ![]() Love you sweet Marite. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~fantastic poem...I like the use of repition...and the sleek imagery~~~ great stuff~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I just had to read this again!! simply wonderful!! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Read this the other day and am back to read and enjoy. You have a lovely way of expressing your feelings. latearrival |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..the imagery and the metaphors..the sleek grace of word on page and tongue.. well done m'friend.. well done.. |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Very nice write. My favorite part: Pearls, they must be pearls upon the brow of bronzing man, so sure of his inside sea that he attracts a glance from me. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I've never heard rain likened to pearls before. I'll certainly remember that image the next time it rains ![]() Ruth I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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