| Open Poetry #41 |
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Lake Station |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan
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. Beyond Another year’s Melting snow The wail Of a train . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply excellent!! [For me, it is always wonderful to see effective and fine Zen Minimalism on these blue pages!] applause! |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
A rigid finger is lacing spring ------ Hooting away the cold? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I do like the visuals here John... love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I felt this one in my chest. A |
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