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Solitude. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Stoical to my greivous heart, i will again fill with burgeonng passion. Ghost white mornings of mist ascending like my love, to ochre nebulous orb of sun. Rising to this life, of rejection. On with truth, rectitude, munificence, forward to beautiousness. Yahweh alone knows the burden upon me. Darkness hides tears of an echoing abandoned soul, adrift in the cosmos. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Exquisite, dear Phil! And uplifting too, even in midst of sorrow. Love, Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a very, very powerful 'write!' "Ghost white mornings of mist ascending like my love, to ochre nebulous orb of sun." the above is especially fine! as is the ending: "...an echoing abandoned soul, adrift in the cosmos" [thus are all of us ultimately] thunderous applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Solitude is an amazingly powerful force, dear Phil, and your words have captured its intense power. May the days ahead bring you peace, and solace in your solitude. hugs, me |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Remember You are never alone...as long as your soul is alive...mine too shall breathe... ~ARH  You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Phil...you touch such sorrow, yet On with truth, rectitude, munificence, forward to beautiousness. I see how even hearts broken can find again the fullest explosion of beauty. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i will be the second to say.. a VERY powerful write.. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you to all who have taken time to reply to my poem..i am but a bird that sings a song that hopefully people can understand, thank you for your kind coments it inspires me to write more beauty where i see it ..thank you all.. If i may..Martie..just having you comment on my poetry is beyond words i can express.. i thank the lord for keeping you among us to delight us with such sublime poetry..you are too bright a star to fade from our view just yet..God bless you and keep.... 1...writing the poetry.. 2..growing the flowers ..you rare bloom you are.. Love to all... Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I emailed you like you asked...is it still the same address? nevermind...i found it thank you for emailing me! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-07-2008 10:30 PM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Darkness hides tears of an echoing abandoned soul, adrift in the cosmos. beautiful words Phil... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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