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Open Poetry #41

The Way to Finding Love

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-01-05 05:41 PM

The Way to Finding Love

The best thing about her
was her desire to please.
I mean the men that she
let in, loved her need.
Oh yes these men loved
her crazy need to please.

The worst thing about her
was her need to please.
For even though she gave
her all in her need to please,
her actions in pursuit of love
would never provide her with the
caring and acceptance that is love,
and none of her actions would suceed
until she changed her views on love,
and stopped thinking that making love
was the way to finding love.

JamesLee
05January
2008

SouthernJustice
Member

since 2007-12-15

Posts 159

1 posted 2008-01-05 06:04 PM

The Irony of it all, my brother.

The Irony of it all..
http://thebellbyauthorunknown.tripod.com/

Clang
Member

since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

2 posted 2008-01-05 06:33 PM

Very true. Very true. The mind and the heart must meld for love to truly xist.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-01-06 06:34 AM

Thank you Southern Justice and Clang for the nice responses...
I checked out the bell and it was very nicely done...enjoyed reading it...James

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