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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. How odd To find you Here Distracted Looking back While you plant Numerous kisses On my face You’re the life I didn’t get To have So soon The present as it is Will come and things Will go on As they did before Still you did appear If only briefly now To take me where We never were . |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
  [This message has been edited by TomMark (01-05-2008 04:44 PM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
most excellent! I am especially fond of the ending: "you did appear... ...briefly... To take me where We never were" serious, sustained applause! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And it felt good, even if it was just a brief moment, didn't it? I sometimes wonder about the possible alternative lives that could have been. Enjoyed this one and can relate. Well done! Tom, I love your spectacular mountain picture!! Love, Margherita |
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