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marcel
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0 posted 2008-01-05 02:17 AM



I once liked five of them
And flirted with about four
Until one found out
Leaving me with eight
But two found another
That left me with six
And still with my hands full
So I mistreated number four
Unaware five had seduced number six
But three is better than none
Something a pimp once said
I guess he never met a southern one
Because now I am left with two
Before hubby is prescribed viagara
Leaving me with number one
I knew I loved her from the go
I told her so as we finished making love
She just laughed when she told me
I was just a number of her twenty-four

Marcel


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-01-05 09:56 AM


this brought a smile ... funny way of life to teach us some lessons!!

Well written.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-01-05 11:42 AM



LOL, best be careful.

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2008-01-07 10:38 PM


in your own unique way...you articulated the unspoken sound.
nice to read you again Keith.
Brighter times ahead.

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