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Open Poetry #41

Apology Not Accepted

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2008-01-04 09:34 PM

I occupy this moment of time
On this small piece of reality
Counting white petals on blooming daisies
Under purple clouds concealing thunder
With purity stubbornly washing auburn tears
From the eyes of a sinful heart
Just to blur thoughts of peace and salvation
Within the creases of a prophet's journal
Dust covered skin-like golden parchment
Invisible to the touch of happiness;
But still I reminisce the scent of love
An aphrodisiac to the soul of man
During those other mistakes of weakness
When words reach as dreams
Eroding like rocks at the basin of old river beds
Until all that is left
Is the scattered fragrance of apologies and unforgiveness…….

Marcel

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2008-01-04 10:10 PM

Frustrating, isn't it? Love twists and
turns us in many directions.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-01-05 08:37 PM

Dang, Marcel, this is a finely written powerful emotive piece!
Wishing you warm.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-01-06 06:46 AM

A nice piece of writing...James

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