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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-01-03 06:55 PM

transience (II)

what are we
at best?

a rainbow
reflected in
a drop of rain
approaching
the dusty
earth.

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (01-04-2008 07:18 PM).]

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-01-03 06:57 PM

smiles... Bruce.. your words always smile me! Beautiful love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-01-03 08:16 PM

A rainbow
out of sprinkler
echoes up the smile
of misty sky

[This message has been edited by TomMark (01-03-2008 09:00 PM).]

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-01-04 12:16 PM

At best we are the ones who see and record
these beautiful thoughts and obviously some are better than others.
Ida

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2008-01-04 06:32 AM

Bruce, a friend of mine last week thought I was strange as it was raining and I sat in her car watching and following the raindrops as they flowed into the existing streams made before them on the windshield. Sort of a mesmerizing moment. But calming.

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-01-04 06:57 PM

Sigh ...
as long as we are aware of rainbow colors
we are magnificent in reflection!

Transience brings transformation and "dust" is only a small part of it, I believe.

Enjoy reading you, always.

Love,
Margherita

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

6 posted 2008-01-09 04:16 PM

The ephemeral quality of life beautifully, though sadly, expressed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2008-01-09 06:27 PM

indeed

at best

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

8 posted 2008-01-13 05:20 PM

The smallest canvas can display great beauty.

A

surrealpoetics
Junior Member

since 2008-01-13

Posts 13
Spokane, Washington

9 posted 2008-01-14 03:25 AM

i am truly enjoying the simple profoundities (sp?) of your works

~Valdron~

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