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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-01-03 06:44 AM



sometimes I wonder about forgiveness
for the serpent who was framed
by some seductress with desires

just someone to talk to, she said
while adam was out with his animals
and something organic or orgasmic

that wouldn't make her fat
and makes her feel good too
oh she don't care if it is bad

she can always talk her way out
if she keeps the fig leaves small
and has costume malfunctions

perhaps an apple mr dragon?
___________

daark

scribblenote..sorry ladies...just had to let CSI check this out further

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-03 06:53 AM


well I'm pleased CSI is on the case Mr Daark!  enjoyed  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-01-03 04:26 PM


quote:
sometimes I wonder about forgiveness
for the serpent who was framed
by some seductress with desires




me too! It's a complex issue!! Would we have wondering minds if we were still in the perfect Eden? Eve and the serpent provided for a change and through that change we came to appreciate paradise. They were bored!
It's the longing for beauty and love and forgiveness that brings LIFE into our lives.

I think I am going to have an apple, want one too?!

Great write!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-01-03 05:10 PM


ms r & b, thanks lady friend

__________

ms mar, thanks babe...and yes please an apple would do fine

Martie
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4 posted 2008-01-03 08:02 PM


Happy New year, neighbor friend... forgiveness makes everyone feel better.  Enjoyed this.
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-01-04 06:14 AM


ms martie, thanks lil neighbor....hope your 08 is wonderful..
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2008-01-04 06:25 AM


and makes her feel good too
oh she don't care if it is bad

  some days are like that...nights too



M

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-01-04 06:28 AM


ms MMs..that is always a nice image in my mind..thanks babe
vandana
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8 posted 2008-01-04 12:05 PM


enjoyed
Sunshine
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9 posted 2008-01-04 12:13 PM


Chuckling at the scribble note...
my favorite show. They'll tackle it...






Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-01-04 02:56 PM


ms van, thanks lady

____________

ms sun....wink and grin, thanks lady friend

aziza
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11 posted 2008-01-05 12:50 PM


Okay, I lost it on

      something organic or orgasmic

You know, I think after reading this that the serpent was framed.

This just has me grinning so big.

A

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