Open Poetry #41 |
Can't Shakespear this Feeling |
DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Oh Tu-be or not Tu-be, Nothing on worth the time to see So I side with laptop and Diet coke And make many a poke What light through window breaks Lightening with thunder that shakes And drops that heavily sound Oh the sadness the soda can’t drown Till the morrow comes with your return To see and touch you I do yearn |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Very funny. I enjoyed this. |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
good to share my mirth with someone, thought noone was going to respond. Thanks be to you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful humor...hope you are not turning Shakespear, or however you spell it, as I consider him excessively over dramatic...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm glad you at least put mind and soul to thought and memory...those you-tube mindsets can rob one of just so much... it's good to see something thinking! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A good way to turn Shakey into something funny....thanx! |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
Oh, god - that was fantastic! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very funny! That is about the extent of my knowledge of ole Bill too. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well, it does take more than a soda to drown sadness. As for William let him spin this was fun. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
this was funny nice short read |
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